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eiliem ([personal profile] eiliem) wrote2009-08-31 11:03 pm

Shayera made me do it

Title: All Shayera's Fault The Monster's Sister
Characters: Une, Luffy, Strawhats, Vivi
Pairing: Nami/violence
Rating: G

If you do not know who Une is...go read this

And this is for [livejournal.com profile] shayera, who encouraged the plot-bunny and kept it bouncing around in my brain.

Also [livejournal.com profile] shayera wrote a prequel-of-sorts to this here (go read, it is lolzy and excellent &hearts)

The Monster's Sister

Luffy is almost as surprised to see Une in Alabasta as he is pleased to see her. His nakama are surprised to hear how strong she is, and it makes Luffy laugh.

“Yeah I always got my ass kicked! Dahahaha! But I could beat her now”

“Just who-” boottothehead “-can you beat?”

“Une!!” Luffy grins happily at his sister, who smiles back like they haven’t spent the past three years apart. He’s about to ask her what she’s doing here when something barrels into him and sends him flying.

“Mellorii~ine &hearts!”

Sanji receives his own boot to the head, courtesy of Nami, and Une laughs. Luffy join in because his sister in here, on his ship with his nakama and he’s never been happier.

“Ahahaha – thanks – haha – thank you all for looking after my little brother.”

Une leaves for her own adventures as quickly as she arrived, after asking Luffy’s crew to look after him – and of course they will, they’re nakama.

Luffy watches the fading Mera Mera flames with something like a sense of loss, but he brushes that aside. He’ll see Une again – they have a promise to meet at the top now – and in the meantime he has to help Vivi.

~~and Sanji's nose was never the same

Title comes from Usopp's comment that "the monster's brother is also a monster" after hearing that Ace always beat Luffy even before eating a Devil's Fruit

And now I am exorcising Une from my brain forever - Go. Away! I only have room for one child of Roger and Rouge in here, and Ace has already staked a claim. Go harass [livejournal.com profile] shayera or something.
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[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
Though, you know, one more Une fic couldn't possibly hurt... ;D

I think...I'm all tapped out of inspiration with her.

Here, I gift her to you: write her, draw her, have her hound you with plot-bunnies, she is yours XD

"Just who-” boottothehead “-can you beat?"

XXPPP yeah, that's my favourite line XXPP

It's also one of my favourite moments in Ace's introduction
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[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Muahaha, yes do enjoy XD

Thank you, the moment was too excellent not to icon &hearts

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 06:35 am (UTC)(link)
Waaah! ^____________^

Bwahahah! You did it! *feels guilty and accomplished*

I love how it's exactly like Ace's introduction, except Sanji gets a boot to his face. ♥

Now you can feel free to get back to your regularly scheduled Ace-ficcing. XD

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 06:41 am (UTC)(link)
except Sanji gets a boot to his face

Lol, oh Sanji. I have the hardest time writing him like that though XS, I can't get into his character or something...;(

Now you can feel free to get back to your regularly scheduled Ace-ficcing.

lol, I hope so - I gave Une to [livejournal.com profile] fashi0n_mistake so hopefully she won't feel the need to pelt me with plot-bunnies anymore. =_=

Okay, sleeping now - have a good day!

[identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely! I read both stories and enjoyed them. Poor Sanji-kun though but I think he probably enjoyed it :)

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Haha, Sanji!fail *rolls eyes at him*

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
This is kinda like the sequel to Shayera's Burning Beauty. ^^

Hahaha! This is funny! XD

Mellorine~~ thwack!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Nuh-uh - Shayera's Burning Beauty was the prequel! XP

That's right, Une!fic originated from this highly shroomed brain. actually, [livejournal.com profile] naye first suggested it, so it's her fault And...uh, there's another one here, in case you missed it ^^;

Mellorine~~ thwack!

Ahahaha - win &hearts

Your icon is love!! &hearts&hearts

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! <3

And well, the Une!fic was a good idea. I'm not into gender-changed character that much but this was different! It's very interesting!

Oh, do you think the Une should have long hair or the same short hair as Ace? :3

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I have never even thought of gender-swapping a character before but, well, Une is sort of kind of...canon? The name is canon, therefore there must exist an alternate verse in which Roger and Rouge had a girl! Therefore...canon? Lol. I guess I don't so much consider her to be Ace gender-swapped as, like...his twin sister or something ^^;

I picture her with shoulder-length hair. Not sure why. Compromise between Ace's short hair and Rouge's long hair? I have no idea - my brain works in strange and mysterious ways. ^^

But! She definitely coloured the back-strap of her bikini so it would match the tattoo. Because she is a dork. XP

Oh god, why won't these character get out of my head @_@

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah-- You mean like, this is kinda how it'll look like if Ace was born to be a girl? XD

Shoulder length then! :3

And if your brain works in strange and mysterious ways-- that would be cool! My brain doesn't work properly. T.T

Ahahaha! She'll haunt you forever! XD

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
this is kinda how it'll look like if Ace was born to be a girl?

That was the idea ^^

You icon is Fan-fucking-tastic!

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha! Thanks! I forgot where I got it though. My memory is only 5 bytes. T.T

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 08:59 am (UTC)(link)
Haha thank you for showing me the way to this one as well. :)
I think the titel which you got inspiration from, by usopp's line in the story itself is pretty good.

it's well fitting.

“Just who-” boottothehead “-can you beat?” XD Yeah that's gonna stay with me, especially the boottothehead part.

Poor sanji issn't really lucky though. XD

really nice written as well. :) Une's starting to get to me.
:) brilliant work!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Usopp has some pretty fantastic lines XD

Une's starting to get to me.

yessss, be infected by the Une-virus! *needs a zombie!icon to do this properly*

glad you liked it! ^^

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha indeed. I especially love the disseases he can get.

"I suddenly have the I-can't-go-to-that-scary-island-dissease"XD or something else like that.

XD gaaah. XD don't put it on me even more *laughs* I'm infected enougha s it is. yesterday I was tempted to draw a fanart to but was able to hold back. but yeah I like it.

I'd offer making you a zombie Icon with this. XD but yeah.. there might be some around.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Usopp's disease are awesome and lulzy &hearts

DRAW DRAW DRAW DRAW DRAW DRAW please? *puppy eyes*

XD

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
:D I know right. I tried getting away with a I have a dissease as well .. XD but my mom didn't buy it.

Oh.. wait.. XD you want me to draw. *laughs* well.. okay... :) I'll try. I hope I won't dissapoint you XD

[identity profile] wispyhollow.livejournal.com 2009-09-08 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
boottothehead

Psssht, like Sanji would ever be successful in womanizing Une. xD His ass is just waiting to be kicked!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-08 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
*griiiiiins*

yes, Sanji in this situation was fail waiting to happen XP

[identity profile] wispyhollow.livejournal.com 2009-09-08 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Waha, I went through all the Une material, and now I'm itching to add to the madness and write a fanfic, too.

...

OF THE MARCO/UNE GENRE. IDK what's going on in my head! Normally, I don't ship crack, but this pairing pounced on me after reading one amongst the fics in Uneverse and I think it would be PERFECT :O ASDF SRSLY.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-08 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
AHAHAHA

Join! JOIN THE SHROOMY MADNESS FUN!

OF THE MARCO/UNE GENRE.

AHAHAA - how appropriate XP People ship Ace/Marco so obviously someone had to ship Marco/Une &hearts

Do it XD

and then draw it &hearts

[identity profile] wispyhollow.livejournal.com 2009-09-09 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, you don't know how much I would LOVE to spend some time making a cute little Une doujinshi - it's be so much FUN. But I'm currently really behind on this month's chapter of Ruste∂ so if I take out time to draw doujin, I'm gonna end up really disappointed in myself later. Arrrrg~ :'O

I'll take up the fanfic prompt, though, in a bit! =D

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-09 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
^^ maybe later then XP

Whee, fanfic &hearts

Good luck with Ruste∂!

[identity profile] wispyhollow.livejournal.com 2009-09-09 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Waha, thanks! ^///^