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eiliem ([personal profile] eiliem) wrote2009-09-17 12:01 pm
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Luffy!win 2

So, I read chapter 544 last night while waiting for scanlations - the chapter where Luffy has his rawr!encounter with Blackbeard.

And this, kind of, niggled at me.

It's not a real drabble, and will never be complete fic, but in honour of the massive Luffy!win &hearts of chapter 557 &hearts&hearts I thought I might as well share it.

Title: Luffy!Win: Rematch
Characters: Luffy, Blackbeard
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] naye

Summary: Some time after Ace gets rescued, Luffy runs into Blackbeard. They have an argument. It ends like this:

Rematch

“I don’t believe in your Fate. I didn’t rescue Ace because it was destiny – I saved him because I didn’t give up! None of us did.”

“So now what, Strawhat? Do we battle so you can avenge your brother’s disgrace?”

“No. Ace told me not to fight you.”

“Zehahaha! Running to big brother now? Where’s your pride Strawhat Luffy?”

“You’re going to stay away from me. You’re going to stay away from my brother. You’re going to stay away from my nakama. You’re going to stay away from my brother’s nakama.”

“And if I don’t?”

“Then we test your “fate” against my fists. And I won’t lose.”

~~


For the lulz, [livejournal.com profile] naye thought about just who was included in Luffy's "don't touch or else".


naye: "Okay, how about Jinbei?"
"...don't touch any of my friends."
"Boa Hancock? Works for the government!"
"No."
me: "stay away from Alabasta, Drum, Kuja...
naye: East Blue.
ALL OF IT.
me: "I know people on Shabaondy"
naye: "And fishmen? MY FRIENDS. they feed me takoyaki~"
naye: "Oh, and no attacking cooks. On principle"
me: ..."you can attack the Tenryuubito though, I don't like them"
me: Water 7!!!
"Don't touch"
naye: "Marines?"
"...well."
me: "leave Coby and .... alone"
naye: "You can have goat-guy."
me: "you couldn't hurt Grandpa if you wanted to thought so..."
naye: GOAT GUY AND TENRYUUBITO. That's what's left.

...oh One Piece. So. Much. Crack. &hearts

[identity profile] scribe-protra.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
The extra discussion at the end made me lul greatly. And wonder what would happen is Blackbeard tried to fight with Garp.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Garp would EAT HIM!

XP


It was a lulzy discussion, and made up for my brain going "what have I written!?!?!?!" o_O

[identity profile] scribe-protra.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
...I would totally enjoy reading that fic.

[identity profile] velshtein.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
dflskdj Luffy and Blackbeard lsdkfjs. *dies* I love this so much. And while I really really really want to eventually see the Whitebeard pirates get to take out Blackbeard, Luffy VS Blackbeard would be amazing too.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
XP

It...it's been building towards that? Ace has dibs and has been hurt far more by Blackbeard than Luffy - all the Whitebeard pirates have.

But Luffy had that epic hate at first sight that was just, like, Luffy? What?

And there are...as;kfjah; - a thousand parallels that Oda has drawn between the two. Like [livejournal.com profile] naye once said that Blackbeard was Luffy without the good qualities that make Luffy Luffy!

Then again, it's Oda, so who knows!!

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
WAAAHHH~~<3 I love how the dialogues went!! The first half and the second half of the post~~ in short. EVERYTHING!! We had some burning!Luffy at first and the second was---

adjfgksdgajdbgjkhl

dsafgadgadsg

asdahds

HAHAHAH!! I laughed out, dear me! XD Especially the...
me: "leave Coby and .... alone"

*laughs loudly again and again and again*

My stomach hurts and it's your fault~~ XD
*grins*

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha ^^;

Whee~ crack &hearts XP

HAHAHAH!! I laughed out, dear me! XD Especially the...
me: "leave Coby and .... alone"


Oh yay! You caught that &hearts XD

I'm...sorry about your stomach here, have some laughing mushrooms

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Funny how he seem to be so serious while forgetting Helmeppo's name~~

Aww Luffy~~<3
How adorable can you get?? <3

Laughing shrooms?? Are you trying to kill me?? (death by laughter)
I'll gladly have them! XD

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
No! Don't die!!!!

lol - I love running jokes, oh Luffy - you can never remember _anyone's_ name! (although he remembered Whitebeard's name *is impressed*)

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha! XD

Jokes are fun! XD

And I'm impressed too! Even with simple things, Luffy can manage to amaze us. Like when Luffy asked what Robin was reading-- he made his nakamas mind totally go crazy! XD

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Luffy! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

YES. Luffy wants to protect everyone (except for the people he don't like, which is... pretty much only REALLY evil people) and then that's what happens!! XDDD

Oh Luffy. You'll be the BEST King!

Also: Luffy has an argument with Kurohige that ends with Go Away! That's WIN right there. :D

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
The world will sing when Luffy is king! (lol, Great Big Sea &hearts)

It...the idea snuck into my head and. Wouldn't. Go. AWAY!

[identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
What about Don Flamingo? I wouldn't mind HIM and Blackbeard going at it?

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Whee~

*seconds this*

^____________^

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha. XD oh yeah that's luffy all the way. Great way of portraying him. :D really.. so short yet amazing I love it. :D

"Oh, and no attacking cooks. On principle"

XD I second that statement, leave the cooks alone!

"you can attack the Tenryuubito though, I don't like them"

XD GOLD@

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahaha, yes, leave the cooks alone!

(they haz foooood XP)

glad you enjoyed it! ^^
ext_301790: (speedsuit)

[identity profile] peachpai.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
“Then we test your “fate” against my fists. And I won’t lose.” YES. 8DDD

And the extra bit was much lulz. XD

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
XD

That line, really, was the reason for the rest of it &hearts

and yay, crack XP ^_______________^

[identity profile] elvenarchress.livejournal.com 2009-09-18 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
All hail the Pirate King!!! XXXXDDD

You just can't win against him XD

Ace has dibs on Blackbeard and of course Luffy respects that. Even if he'd like to do the beating, Luffy doesn't interfere in other people's fights. :D

how can such a crack!filled story be so epic?!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-18 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
XXXXXXDDDDDDDDDDDD

...with Ace, I think it's less a "I haz dibs" as a "stay the hell away from him, he'll eat you" (pffft, Ace, have more faith in your outoto &hearts)

because it's Luffy!win - although I have to admit I was kind of surprised by the overwhelming positive reactions to this XP

[identity profile] miyorin.livejournal.com 2009-09-18 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
“Then we test your “fate” against my fists. And I won’t lose.”

OH HOW I LOVE THAT!<3
8D

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-18 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
^___^

Of course he won't lose, oh Luffy. &hearts
naye: A cartoon of a woman with red hair and glasses in front of a progressive pride flag. (will beat you)

[personal profile] naye 2009-09-19 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
This is all kinds of awesome because it's so true to Luffy. Luffy might not understand danger, but he gets Ace has dibs. (Or just. Ace said so.) And he knows that if they fight? Blackbeard is GOING DOWN. Somehow. Because he is Luffy. *loves loves*

The chat. SHROOMY BRAINS TOGETHER!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-20 07:04 am (UTC)(link)
^________________^

Yay icon &hearts

(Or just. Ace said so.)

Lol, oh Luffy

Blackbeard is GOING DOWN.

*WANTS TO SEE THIS SO BAD!!!!*

Shroomy Brains FTW!!