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eiliem ([personal profile] eiliem) wrote2009-09-16 09:01 pm

Tiny!Ace & Tinier!Luffy the - what number am I on again? The 10TH! o_o

Title: The Things We Say
Characters: tiny!Ace, tinier!Luffy, Dadan, mentions of Garp
Pairing: Luffy/hat
Rating: G
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] naye (and thank you [livejournal.com profile] shayera for the title!)

Wow. I've written ten of these thing now o_O

Waaaaay back [livejournal.com profile] arcielfreeder asked me for some brother fluff and I...had my brain in Angst!Mode orz

So here, thank you for all the beautiful happy-making doujinshi of love &hearts and...hopefully this is fluffy enough ^^

The Things We Say

“Do you want to talk about it?”

“There’s nothing to talk about.”

“I see, you and Luffy just arbitrarily decided to not speak to each other. For fun.”


“What were you thinking Luffy! You could have drowned!”

“That bird stole my hat!”

“I don’t care about the stupid hat - You could have died!”



“He’s so stupid!”

“I know – he gets it from his grandfather, I swear.”

“He always does stupid things and he never thinks and that stupid hat--”

“Ah.”

“…what?”

“Oh, nothing. You wouldn’t have happened to say that to Luffy’s face, though, would you?”

“…”

“Oh Ace. It’s not fair, is it, being the responsible one?”

“He’s going to get himself killed one day and I—”

“Shh, it’s okay. He’s tougher than he looks, your brother, he’ll be alright.”

“But he doesn’t think!

“He does. He doesn’t always think about the consequences of his actions, which is frightening for us, but I assure you, there are thought processes going on in his brain – even if we can’t always follow them.”

“That’s not going to keep him safe though!”

“Well, no, not always, but he’s getting better – he only does half as many fatally dangerous stupid things as he did when we first got him, right? And Garp used to be even more of an idiot than Luffy and—”

“That’s impossible.”

“Well, maybe not more stupid. Maybe as stupid. But the point is, Garp outgrew…lots of it. Some of it. Enough, in any case. And until Luffy is ready to stand on his own, he has a very devoted, very strong older brother who couldn’t take better care of him.”

“Who he won’t talk to.”


“Luffy, we need to talk about Ace.”

“He said Shanks’ hat is stupid. He’s stupid.”

“He was scared Luffy. He worries about you. And it scares him the most when you fall in the water. It scares me. And when people are scared, they say things they don’t mean. Like calling their little brother’s precious treasure stupid.

“That’s dumb.”

“…When people are angry, they sometimes do things they don’t mean, too – like ignore their brother all day.”

“I don’t want to talk to him, he said the hat was stupid. It’s not! I made a promise to Shanks and--”

“But he saved the hat, didn’t he? If he really thought it wasn’t worth anything he could have just saved you and left it in the water, couldn’t he? Even if he had left it, though, even if he called it stupid – Luffy your life is precious to Ace. Your promise to Shanks is important, and should be honoured, but to Ace and me you are worth so much more. And Luffy, you hurt his feelings today.”

“…I’m sorry.”

“What are you apologizing to me for?”

“I—”

“Your brother was outside, last I saw him.”



“I’m sorry I yelled at you. …And I’m sorry I wouldn’t talk to you and ran away from you and wouldn’t play with you all day. And I’m sorry I hurt your feelings. And I’m really really really sorry I said I didn’t want to be your brother anymore. I didn’t mean it! You’re the best brother is the world and I’m really really really really really really…really happy you’re mine. You’re important to me too.”

“…”

“Well, um…it’s okay if you don’t want to talk to me, because I said mean things to you and that wasn’t nice. But, uh, I’m just going to sit here and talk to you, okay? So I’m not ignoring you anymore. Because I shouldn’t have, you were taking care of me – like you always do – and… Oh. And I’m sorry I scared you too. If a bird comes and steals my hat to make a nest again I’ll let you save it. Hey, when you’re not mad at me anymore do you want to go and practice making rafts again? I promise I won’t try mine out until you say it’s okay. And we never finished talking about what our Jolly Rogers are going to be, when we’re old enough to leave. And—"

“Me too.”

“Huh?”

“I’m happy you’re my brother too.”

~~

...I now have a Dadan tag! As in, I have written enough fic with Dadan in it to merit a tag.

Dadan hasn't even been introduced! @_@ Oda! What are you doing to my brain!?!

I did not tear up when I wrote Luffy's apology, no I did not.

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
They're so cute! And so much like actual children, except Luffy's kind of childhood antics are special and Ace has to handle it and sometimes you do say things that you don't mean...

♥♥♥♥

There's totally a hug at the end. ^_____^

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:44 am (UTC)(link)
^____^

Luffy's kind of childhood antics are special

Ahaha - soooooo true &hearts

There's totally a hug at the end.

&hearts&hearts&hearts

*wants canon brother-hug please Oda!*

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww~~ <3

T-This is...

*loves*
*and loves*
*and loves again*

It's wonderfully fluffy~~<3
Luffy's apologizing and... and. Luffy said Ace is his! Waaah!!! <3

Thank you so much for this~~<3
I totally love this!! <3

Now I feel quite fluffy myself!! XD

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
^____________^

yay fluff! &hearts

Luffy said Ace is his!

XD of course!

I'm glad you like it :)

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Gah, I'm drowning in the fluffyness.. and I love it.!
Very wonderfull story and very pleasant to read.

;A; so damn cute realy!. Thank you for sharing this.

and luffy rants when he apoligizes. XD EVEN CUTER!

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
What! Oh noes! *Throws Ace at you*

Ace: What? Wait - she's not literally drowning!
Eiliem: Go rescue her
Ace: *grumbles*


...oooooookay, that's enough with the shrooms ^^;

Ahaha - Luffy!rants XP

Glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*clings on to ace* .. I don't float. XD save me?

((I can imagine ace pushing my head underwater here but I'm pretending he won't. XD ))

The shroom made me laugh. XD Really thank you!

[identity profile] elyon14340.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so cute. It's just like Luffy to talk and talk and talk without pausing. LOL.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
^____________^

Luffy! &hearts *snuggles him *

[identity profile] elvenarchress.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 12:26 pm (UTC)(link)
SQUEEEEE!!!

Love the realistic portrayal of siblings :) even the close D brothers fight but in the end, they make up and become even closer XD

I'll never stop adoring protective!Ace and wanting to hug Luffy into a squishy rubber ball XD

I don't suppose you can do a fic where tiny!Luffy's the one giving the love/care? or tiny!Ace missing his bro cause garp took him training and realizes everythings so quiet when he's not around?...meh, I'm just musing XD...I love your fics whatever the topic

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Lolz - can you tell I have siblings :P

wanting to hug Luffy into a squishy rubber ball

D'aaaawwwwwwwww ahaha, that would be fun &hearts

How did you know I had a plot-bunny like that on the shelf?! o_O *pokes at plot-bunny*

[identity profile] elvenarchress.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
can you tell I have siblings :P

yup, it shows XD and I can relate cause I have 'em too. we fight a lot but we've got each other's backs :D

How did you know I had a plot-bunny like that on the shelf?!

Lucky guess? no I'm not trying to read your mind *feeds bunny*

[identity profile] cherrichik.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
uwaaahh, *sniffs* so sweet it gives me cavities :]

i hope you never stop writing ace x luffy gen. ever.

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, yikes! *throws dentist at you*

I will keep writing them until they leave my brain? *attempts to pull Ace out* Noooo, they're stuck. ^^;
ext_301790: (nest)

[identity profile] peachpai.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
as he did when we first got him Like getting a new pet? 8D Luffy does have about as much energy and common sense as a young puppy.

Cute! ♥

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
AHAHAHAHAHAHA

Luffy the puppy - yes! XD

Glad you liked it ^_________^
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[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no! *revives*

Better? :D

[identity profile] metisket.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Ace!

FINALLY I HAVE MET HIM!

Of course, now he'll disappear for 8 million chapters. ARGH. But! He does exist! So exciting! Why does he have a tattoo of his own name (misspelled)? Is he afraid he'll become lost or brain damaged? Maybe he can't be bothered with introductions?

Or is it JUST BECAUSE?

But anyway, this means I can read brother!fic now, right? Of course right. And yay!

But the point is, Garp outgrew…lots of it. Some of it. Enough, in any case.

:D :D :D

This pretty well describes older Luffy, too, yes. He certainly outgrew some of it. Sort of. XD

This tiny!Ace&Luffy tag of yours: I shall investigate it. *enthused*

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
CAREFUL!

Some of the Luffy-Ace fic have spoilers for Chapter 550!!!

I will message you the links to the safe ones.

Of course, now he'll disappear for 8 million chapters. ARGH. But! He does exist! So exciting!

YAY!!!! &hearts Aaaace &hearts

Why does he have a tattoo of his own name (misspelled)? Is he afraid he'll become lost or brain damaged? Maybe he can't be bothered with introductions?

Or is it JUST BECAUSE?


BECAUSE ODA IS A MAD CRACKTASTIC GENIUS. Who eats shrooms!

...there is a story behind the tattoo, I am sure. We have not yet learned it, though ^^


(also - ALABASTA ARC FTW!!!!)

[identity profile] noodlesticks.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
The brotherly fluuuuff, how I love it so!

This story is adorable, and Ace has to be the best big brother ever, and Luffy the best little brother ever.

I love how Dadan is the voice of reason in all of your stories ♥

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
^_^

Glad you liked it

...Dadan had to deal with Ace and Luffy and Garp - if they weren't the voice of reason, no one would have survived!!! XXPPP
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[personal profile] naye 2009-09-19 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Even your dialogue is genius and in-character and adorable awwwwwww~! ♥

[identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com 2009-09-23 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
That-- that doesn't make me happy at all! *does happy!Chopper dance*

Супер блог!

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