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Title: Out of the Ocean
Characters: Ace and Luffy (from tiny to...not-so-tiny)
Pairings: the OTP of One Piece, Luffy/Beetle; as well as brief mentions of Luffy/Hat and the Ace/Sleep/Food love triangle
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] naye :D

This one was quite unabashedly inspired by [livejournal.com profile] naye's Seadream go read, it is beautiful

Also by my challenge to myself to write fic without Ace angst o_o (it was hard at first...and then the fic wrote itself, lol)

Out of the Ocean

The first time Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean, he was the one who threw the rubber boy in.

They were having their usual sparring session – otherwise known as Luffy-losing-badly-while-Ace-kicked-his-skinny-ass time – and Ace had grabbed the other boy by the wrist and heaved him into the water. Luffy was underwater for a full minute before Ace – beginning to worry – had remembered about Devil Fruits, and the sea, and ohmygod-

“Shit. I’m so sorry – I forgot!”

“Whew, that was scary!” And Luffy had laughed before throwing himself at Ace again.

Later, playing one-man soccer with his new rubber ball on the way home, Ace reflected that he would have to be more careful – Luffy wasn’t quite as indestructible as he seemed.


The second time Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean, the two boys had had a raft-building contest, during the course of which Ace discovered that Luffy’s inability to build anything was only exceeded by his failure to draw coherently.


The third time Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean, he almost didn’t. Ace had fallen asleep face-first in the picnic basket and didn’t see Luffy trip over a tree root into the water. The splash didn’t rouse him, but the sudden absence of Luffy-noises jolted something in his subconscious.

They never ate near water after that.


The fourth time Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean involved a water-beetle.


The fifth, sixth, and seventh times Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean happened shortly after the rubber boy discovered he could launch himself over great distances by stretching his arms like a slingshot.

It was an effective technique, but his aim was abysmal. Worse still, Luffy decided that practice made perfect.

Ace dove after his brother three times in fifteen minutes before he managed to point him in a safe(r) direction.


The number of times Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean after the latter tried to rescue his wind-blown (and on one memorable occasion, bird-borrowed) hat do not bear counting.


The last time Ace fished Luffy out of the ocean, his brother misjudged the distance to his departing boat, crashing into the water a foot shy of safety.

Whenever Ace had imagined his grand departure for adventure, he always sailed away dramatically, without even a glance behind. He definitely didn’t turn around to dump an apologetic Luffy back on dry land. Nor was he soaking wet.

His wounded sense of romance was assuaged slightly, however, when Luffy grinned sheepishly before presenting Ace with the hand-painted wooded bead necklace he made for him. (Which, given what Ace knew about Luffy’s artistic ability, meant that Dadan had picked out, painted, and threaded the beads under Luffy’s careful supervision).


Ace will never fish Luffy out of the ocean again. Neither brother is particularly bothered by this.

Whether their unconcern is extreme carelessness or absolute faith is not something they worry about - and nothing anyone else could understand.

Date: 2009-07-26 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feriowind.livejournal.com
asdf;aksldjfa;slkdfj D'AAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THIS IS TOO CUTE! I love the last scene especially. Heeee, I adore the idea that Ace's necklace was a present from Luffy~~ <333

;___; Guuh, I love your Ace+Luffy gen fics. Please never stop writing them, because everything you've written so far have all been FABULOUS!

Date: 2009-07-26 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
^______________^

Glad you like then - sadly I will be out of town for a couple of weeks (and away from the internet! ;_;) but when I get back I will hopefully have more fic to share!
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Date: 2009-07-26 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
OOoooo - I don't think I've made anybody teary yet! Yay! *feels accomplished*

love your icon.

Date: 2009-07-26 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com
*makes squeeful noises*

I wake up in the morning to two new fics from you, and there's CUTE OVERLOAD!!! ^_______^

I love the counting of the first few times - and Ace throwing Luffy in because he forgot. Tiny Ace was tiny, and Luffy does seem indestructible as long as you're just pounding him! Aww.

And then Ace falling asleep and almost missing Luffy falling into the water! That's a problem! ^.^

And, and! Luffy discovering his Gomu Gomu no Rocket! Poor brainless kid! XDD

The final part makes my heart twinge a bit, just because it's literally the last time. And it's when Ace leaves. (Luffy giving Ace that necklace! I like that! ^_^)

Date: 2009-07-26 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
Waking up to cute overload is always a good thing :D

and Ace throwing Luffy in because he forgot.

*snicker* - as [livejournal.com profile] naye said, that's what happens when your new little brothers don't come with instruction manuals. XPP

And, and! Luffy discovering his Gomu Gomu no Rocket! Poor brainless kid!

Poor Ace! lol (even when there is no angst I can't not torment him a little bit ^^;)

Date: 2009-07-27 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinguinolatino.livejournal.com
*love this so much* The varied tales of Ace fishing Luffy out of the ocean are so cute. And the last one, awww, Ace's last time fishing him out, Ace not leaving the dramatic way he imagined and Luffy giving him that necklace... *wibbles*

the OTP of One Piece, Luffy/Beetle; as well as brief mentions of Luffy/Hat and the Ace/Sleep/Food love triangle

Ahahaha. Now those are some canon pairings. XD

Date: 2009-07-27 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
Ace not leaving the dramatic way he imagined

You'd think that living with Luffy for seven years would have cured him of any delusions that things would go the way he intends them to...

Canon pairings ftw. XP

I love, love, love getting comments from you because you always have an adorable D brother icon for me to SQUEE over! &hearts

Date: 2009-09-03 02:26 pm (UTC)
naye: A cartoon of a woman with red hair and glasses in front of a progressive pride flag. (brothers)
From: [personal profile] naye
This was exactly what I needed right now. ♥ I know I've flailed a lot over this, but - it's so lighthearted and sweet and funny and Ace is SUCH a good big brother it makes me smile and smile and SMILE~!

Date: 2009-09-03 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
Oh good, I'm glad this helped with the evil that is my brain!!!

Ace is SUCH a good big brother

He is! &hearts&hearts

Date: 2009-09-04 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angenabiki.livejournal.com
D'aaaaaaw. I had to fight back a tiny surge of fangirlish glee.

Date: 2009-09-04 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
Don't fight it! Embrace it! Glory in fanish love for Oda's characters! XXPP

Oh those two. The more we learn about their relationship just...the better and better it gets! &hearts

Date: 2009-09-06 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com
fsfdadadasdadgdfgfgfhrdfgdh!!!!

I can't handle this~~ *faints*
This is too cute~~<3

Have to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeee~~

Date: 2009-09-08 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eiliem.livejournal.com
All these happy comments! You're going to give me an ego! *blushes*

^^

Date: 2009-09-09 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com
But REALLY~~

it's just hard to stop reading your fics~~<3

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