ext_137839 (
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2009-09-12 04:41 pm (UTC)
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Poor
kids
. *snuggles them*
This one is more edited than the one I read before! I love the way you expanded the ending, with Garp holding Ace and comforting him and
of course
he had moments like that, too. Garp ♥
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This one is more edited than the one I read before! I love the way you expanded the ending, with Garp holding Ace and comforting him and of course he had moments like that, too. Garp ♥