The Kanda backstory was heartbreaking, and I really didn't mind the overly long flashback because it was going somewhere! At least.... it felt like it was going somewhere.
Kanda spending this chapter in "alternate brain space" I can buy ¬¬ sort of
But Allen's behaviour made no sense to me.
It made sense for him, at the end of last chapter, to stop Kanda from destroying Alma. Allen's crazy like that.
But he went through so many mood swings in this chapter @_@ Why, you crazy crazy boy, are you trying to have a conversation with a batshit insane AKUMA!!??!!?!?
Maybe it was the art that threw me - but he seemed disproportionally angry at Kanda - and just... AAAAARRRRGGHHHH THIS CHAPTER! WHAT.
The one moment, the one moment when Allen really felt like Allen to me was right after Kanda stabbed him and he did his "this-is-how-I-smile-when-I'm-in-pain" and said it made no sense to him. You and me both, Allen, you and me both.
It was also beyond stupid that they were both trying to kill each other in a room full of Noah. And the Earl. =_=
The art >_< - I really liked the gothic feel of the early chapter, but I'm not going to argue with Hoshino prettying things up. This chapter though. What. What was going on!? I couldn't tell anyone apart half the time, the lines were all over the place, I could barely follow what was going on! And I really cannot forgive Kanda's hair. THIS IS NOT DRAGON BALL!
I can't believe this, but I'm kind of almost excited that the Fourteenth has finally shown up. PLOT! Sweet Jesus plotis happening again! Maybe. Hopefully.
Now Kanda snap out of it and get Allen... 's body the fuck out of there!
I... have given up on Reborn ^^; Maybe it's the art, I don't know. I will stick to your fic, it is sweet, and sad, and nakama-y &hearts
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I know, I know!. T_T
The Kanda backstory was heartbreaking, and I really didn't mind the overly long flashback because it was going somewhere! At least.... it felt like it was going somewhere.
Kanda spending this chapter in "alternate brain space" I can buy ¬¬ sort of
But Allen's behaviour made no sense to me.
It made sense for him, at the end of last chapter, to stop Kanda from destroying Alma. Allen's crazy like that.
But he went through so many mood swings in this chapter @_@ Why, you crazy crazy boy, are you trying to have a conversation with a batshit insane AKUMA!!??!!?!?
Maybe it was the art that threw me - but he seemed disproportionally angry at Kanda - and just... AAAAARRRRGGHHHH THIS CHAPTER! WHAT.
The one moment, the one moment when Allen really felt like Allen to me was right after Kanda stabbed him and he did his "this-is-how-I-smile-when-I'm-in-pain" and said it made no sense to him. You and me both, Allen, you and me both.
It was also beyond stupid that they were both trying to kill each other in a room full of Noah. And the Earl. =_=
The art >_< - I really liked the gothic feel of the early chapter, but I'm not going to argue with Hoshino prettying things up. This chapter though. What. What was going on!? I couldn't tell anyone apart half the time, the lines were all over the place, I could barely follow what was going on! And I really cannot forgive Kanda's hair. THIS IS NOT DRAGON BALL!
I can't believe this, but I'm kind of almost excited that the Fourteenth has finally shown up. PLOT! Sweet Jesus plotis happening again! Maybe. Hopefully.
Now Kanda snap out of it and get Allen... 's body the fuck out of there!
I... have given up on Reborn ^^; Maybe it's the art, I don't know. I will stick to your fic, it is sweet, and sad, and nakama-y &hearts