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eiliem ([personal profile] eiliem) wrote2009-07-26 05:35 pm

Luffy!win snippet the 1st

Title: Birth of a Power
Characters: Luffy, Sengoku, Ace, the world
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] naye also her encouragement is the only reason I posted this, it being hugely different from everything I wrote before

This sprang from my desire to see Luffy take on Sengoku like he did Spandam at Enies Lobby - not physically, ideologically (or something). Because Luffy can be made of win, even if he is an idiot, and I love seeing him yell at people that they're wrong.

Birth of a Power

“WHO CARES WHO HIS DAD IS! HE’S MY BROTHER AND I WON’T LET YOU KILL HIM!”

Luffy!!! Get out of here!

Sengoku stepped forward and stared down at his tiny challenger. "It is our duty to eliminate the last of Roger’s legacy. We will not allow another Pirate King to be born.”

“Then you’re wasting your time. Ace isn’t the one you have to worry about. And Roger isn’t either. He was the Pirate King, but he’s dead now. I’m alive. And I’m going to be the next Pirate King! I’m going to be the greatest pirate ever – and I won’t let you hurt anyone I care about! Not Robin! Not Zoro or Nami or Usopp or Sanji or Chooper or Franky or Brooke! And not Ace!”

The world held its breath as Luffy settled his hat firmly over his head, and took a fighting stance against the best the Marines had to offer.

“So get out of my way if you don’t want to get hurt.”


Years later, many would cite this as the moment Strawhat Luffy stopped being a pirate – and became a Power.
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[personal profile] naye 2009-07-27 12:34 am (UTC)(link)


The title is awesome. It's - that is something I don't think will get jossed! (Unless, somehow, the broadcast is interrupted and everyone goes temporarily deaf and blind.) Luffy is going to kick holy ass OMG I CANNOT WAIT. \o/

So this is a lovely little thing to tide me over until the next chapter!

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2009-07-27 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
Ooohhh! ♥

This is Luffy. And possible Jossing or not, if he gets the chance, this is what he would say in a nutshell. Luffy, and his very simple and completely unarguable logic. The world government needs to be told off!

And he's going to kick ass on live TV! He's definitely going to be a Power after this. :D

[identity profile] lotus-eclipse.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
This is so Luffy-like~

I loved that he said Robin's name first. He'd probably still remember that she'd been taken away from the Mugiwara once and won't let it happen again.

And when Luffy's stubborn and wants something, his luck and persistence paves through to an incredible force.

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-06 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
YESSSSSS!!!

Luffy will become the Pirate King so don't kill Ace, Sengoku!!! you bastard!

But I love how Luffy dearly loves his nakama and Ace~~<3