This is absolute epic love. And that's when I say it short. But I really loved it. I love the entire serie of this one.
this is like totaly epic.. awsomness that makes my heart flutter and leaves me with a really good feeling for the rest of the day.

I really like your style of writing, it just drags you along not letting you go untill the very end. And I for one can really appreciate that

Epic win on the interaction between Luffy and Whitebeard.
But the interaction with whtiebeard and ace made me fluttery and squeal.

Also Ace and Marco. XD disfunctional brothers. but they are awsome. Yes they are. There are many parts that I like.

Go sleep off the shock of you captain telling you that your little brother reminds him of you're the one person in the world you want nothing to do with; watch your crewmates make asses of themselves. Sleep it off, watch, sleep, watch–

that though. XD yess. Damn awsome.
But to be honset. I'm just in love with the entire fic.
Thank you for sharing