eiliem: (Luffy standing ground)
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Title: The Next Level
Characters: Luffy, Ace, uh, everyone at Marinford
Pairing: Luffy/epic!
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] naye

The Next Level

He’s fighting through a bunch of weird guys and making sure he doesn’t get caught in Smokey’s smoke when he catches, out of the corner of his eye, a blur of red moving towards his brother.

“Shit. Akainu goin’ for Ace! Somebody stop him!”

Akainu. One of the Admirals then, like Aokiji…and the Light-Guy.

“ZORO! This is bad! Zoro’s gonna die!”

“I sliced and sliced at him but my blows simply went right through his body. Yet Rayleigh just stopped him…how?”


The Admiral moves through the fighting quickly, and everything he touches in his red-earth-molasses form bursts into flame.

“It’s only natural for arrows to have such strength when imbued with Haki.”

Luffy can see the blue Bird-Guy trying to get around the Light-Admiral; Whitebeard is holding off some weird Marine machine-thing.

“Why the heck does it hurt!? I’m made of rubber!”

“But you cannot use Haki, can you?”


And Ace, Ace looking quiet and empty and not even fighting anymore.

“I TOLD YOU TO STOP!”

“I have never seen anyone other than our sister who can use that power…!!”


“Get out of my way!”

Luffy steps in front of his brother just before the red Admiral reaches him, and strikes out with both arms.

“LUFFY!”

His fists are warm, hot almost, but he isn’t burned.

Luffy grins.

“Hey Lava-Guy, leave my brother alone.”

Date: 2009-09-27 03:48 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] naye
*squees*

Oh, it will be so massively awesome when this happens! Luffy and the way he figures things out and USES them... Yeah, we'll be seeing controlled Haki soon. Preferably IN SENGOKU'S FACE! rawr

Date: 2009-09-27 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velshtein.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeee~ Luffyluffyluffy. ♥

and making sure he doesn’t get caught in Smokey’s smoke
This made me laugh more than it probably should have. XD
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Date: 2009-09-27 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noodlesticks.livejournal.com
I can't wait for Luffy to start using haki. The WG just will not stand a chance anymore.

Also, brothers~♥

Date: 2009-09-27 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvenarchress.livejournal.com
Now if only that had happened with Magellan ^^; well Luffy evolves when he's got to protect someone (not himself sadly)and what better time then then when his brother's in danger?

I wonder what would have happened if he haki!yelled at Akainu instead?

Date: 2009-09-27 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribe-protra.livejournal.com
:D Eeeeee this is SO COOL.

Date: 2009-09-27 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elisha2kings.livejournal.com
FINALLY! I mean, I've been waiting since Rayleigh took out everyone in the Human Body Shop for Luffy to pick up haki! I suspect that (no offense to your wonderful Luffy/win stories) the actual event will be so much more badass! I can't wait! XD

Date: 2009-09-27 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com
äPWQ3OQI1ÅP0UTORJF!!!!

LUFFY!! It's so perfect, with the flashbacks of Luffy putting things together and then he can stop Akainu with haki and the world is going to go O____O AGAIN!!

Ace will have his umpteenth heart attack.

Date: 2009-09-27 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catiprojectc.livejournal.com
got to love luffy's way of naming people. XD
AND LUFFY IS EPIC WIN LIKE FOREVER!! XD

once again thank you for lovely snipet! *bows*

Date: 2009-09-27 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schneefink.livejournal.com
Yes! Poor Ace... And Luffy being clever and figuring things out, great! And Vegapunk´s machine thing that I´m waiting for.
Just: I don´t really remember, but does Luffy actually get a name right for once and calls Aokiji by his name instead of Ice-Guy (oder snowman or something)? Somehow more surprising than him using haki, because the latter will happen... :D
I hope you don´t mind me friending you, but I don´t want to miss any snippets you post.

Date: 2009-09-27 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wispyhollow.livejournal.com
I AM SO WAITING FOR THIS TO BECOME CANON.

Luffy figuring out his haki is going to be so epic, it'll cause nosebleeds across the globe <333

Date: 2009-09-28 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com
GAHHHHHHHH!!!!!

Ace+Luffy+Haki=EPICNESS!!!!

*hugs you epic-ly*

This should happen!! Odacchi!! DO THIS!! XD

Date: 2009-09-28 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lotus-eclipse.livejournal.com
sdfd;as;lj~ It's just like Luffy to figure it out at the most crucial of times and then totally whoop them! Luffy's made of ultimate win~

Ah the tricky thing called: Haki. I wish Oda-sensei's more clear on how it is and what exactly it is. Luffy's able to control it subconsciously, but it's not controlled.

Date: 2009-09-28 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherrichik.livejournal.com
aw. m'gawd.

epic.
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