eiliem: (Luffy standing ground)
eiliem ([personal profile] eiliem) wrote2009-09-18 10:40 pm

Luffy!win 3

So...once again I bring snippet of the Luffy!win variety. This will never be a proper fic, it consists mostly of dialogue with bits of actual description thrown in...

That said, enjoy?

Title: The Direct Approach
Characters: Luffy, Whitebeard &hearts, Ace, Sengoku, Garp

thanks to [livejournal.com profile] naye for the title

The Direct Approach

“So, who do I have to smack to end this thing?”

“Everyone.”

“That’ll take too long – who gave the order for Ace to be executed?”

“The man in charge is Fleet Admiral Sengoku, he’s the one standing on the execution platform with the seagull on his head.”

“Whitebeard.”

“Yes, rude and impertinent brat?”

“I’m going to kick his ass.”

“Gurarara!! Don’t get ahead of yourself brat: he’d mop the floor with you. And when I get there I’m not waiting around for you to catch up.”

“Oh? In that case--”

Luffy disappeared.


Sengoku might have been prepared for a direct attack, could probably have parried one.

Gomu Gomu no Hammer!

He did not expect the execution platform to be reduced to so much kindling.


Garp and Sengoku both threw themselves out of the way when the platform collapsed, and Luffy grabbed his brother, protecting him from the falling debris and inflating his body so they both landed safely.


“What the hell were you thinking Luffy! Get out of here right now, it’s too dangerous!”

Craaaab-chaaaaaaaan! I need you to come cut these chains!

Shit are you even listening to me!? You’re going to get yourself killed!”

“You’re just like the old man – I’m not going to die!


You taught him soru!?!

“Bwah! Hell no, I have no idea where he picked it up, the reckless idiot.”

[identity profile] velshtein.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
“Craaaab-chaaaaaaaan! I need you to come cut these chains!”

LDKSFJD LMAO. Oh Luffy.

[identity profile] arcielfreeder.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
WAAAAAAAHHHHHH~~<3

Luffy grabbed his brother!! Oh MY!!
*fangirl senses tingling*

And--

“You taught him soru!?!”

*laughs out loud*

This could be what may happen in the next chapter!! Great!! XD

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Luffy!Win is ♥

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“So, who do I have to smack to end this thing?”

“Everyone.”

“That’ll take too long – who gave the order for Ace to be executed?”


Bwah! So much like Luffy! Luffy will kick ass, but whose ass does he need to kick? XDD

Poor Ace, but also YAY! I want to see this. Or something similar. ♥ Next chapter now plx?

I wonder - can Inazuma really cut seastone chains? Wouldn't seastone counter his scissor-ability?

[identity profile] scribe-protra.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 07:15 am (UTC)(link)
khkdfjjhkd OH MAN I LOVE SO HARD. SO HARD. hfjkhdkjsf Luffy so cute.
naye: A cartoon of a woman with red hair and glasses in front of a progressive pride flag. (will beat you)

[personal profile] naye 2009-09-19 07:34 am (UTC)(link)
LUFFY. *_* Is. Wonderful. And made of win, and this speculation is FUNNY CUZ IT'S TRUE. This is totally how it could go down!! ♥

[identity profile] elvenarchress.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
“Yes, rude and impertinent brat?”

XXXXDDD as funny/fitting as that was though, Whitebeard's gonna have to come up with a new nickname...that's rather long :D

And yay for indirect (going for the platform not Sengoku) directness (not bothering with all the other fighters)!

Hell no, I have no idea where he picked it up, the reckless idiot.”

why he learned it himself! Watching other Soru experts...which just shows how much of a quick study Luffy is. *hearts*

Inazuma I think, picks the locks , like how he opened the cell doors.

[identity profile] ishimura.livejournal.com 2009-09-19 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
You taught him soru!?!

Nope, he learnt it from CP9. XD I wonder how Sengoku would react when knowing Ruffy learnt one of the six techniques, which are exclusively taught and hard to obtain, by only watching the Marine's secret CP on top of that!

Sengoku: ASDF;LKJ-WHAT?!

“Craaaab-chaaaaaaaan! I need you to come cut these chains!”

Ruffy calls Izanuma Crab-chan or what? XD

[identity profile] cherrichik.livejournal.com 2009-09-20 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
luffy are ownage.

sengoku are laaame.

ace are still mother hen-ing. XD.